So now what?
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the “fancy copy” that i made for my friend, the rabbit is my signature, i used to have the email address demented_bunnies, that used to be my thing
I think I’ve reached a stage that no matter how much more editing i do it won’t get any better.
There are a gazillion spelling / grammar / tense mistakes still but i’ve read it through 10000 times, well realistically speaking, at least 50 times as of late.
i’m at draft 3.2 … i don’t know why it’s .2, it just is.
i am glad that I was able to somewhat finish it before i left on my trip.
i am uploading it for the world to see!
you don’t have to give feedback but if you want to then i’m all happy and open arms and shit.
best viewed at 85% in adobe reader, since it’s a pdf you can probably read it on your iPad or whatever. someone that was very kind printed portions of the book so she could read it without distractions. I would hate to be the tree that died just so this shitty novel could be printed on it (1000 pieces of paper already died for the cause, no more!) so…
everyday i lament for the trees that were spent on Twilight pages.
i have nothing else to say.
i gave a copy of this draft to someone yesterday! what a thrilling feeling it is to debunk all and any credibility that i once had with this someone by handing him these mere pages.
well …
the copy i gave him isn’t even as good as the copy that you are seeing, because i found like 20 more mistakes, and not even great mistakes, like stupid spelling mistakes that word didn’t pick up like ran should have been rang
oh fuck yes, i’m gonna be a writer 
/stabs self
oh yeah. also, on the cover page, the quote was set in this special font that i fucking love but i realized that it doesn’t show up on if you don’t have that font so i screen capped and made an image of it…unfortunately, its now grainy …so =( i tried…
well, here it is
im leaving the comments open so you can tell me how i’m not wasting my life and that i’m not an unemployed loser, kthxbye
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Oooh! You’re going to be a famous authoress soon?? Looking forward to reading your work! =D
nope, i dont know who will be willing to publish this
i hope to hear some of your thoughts on it soon
Congrats on finishing! I think this calls for a drink :)
thank u thank u yes yes drink yes
Oh congrats on the finish!
I tried to critique your work, but it was so damn good – and now you’ve gone and “corrected” it and sent it again – and my brain is like “BOOM” asplode.
ALSO: Font Love.
It comes up beautifully on iBooks, so screw everyone else.
yah jayne!
you have to give me something to work with!
i really want to believe you that it’s good but it’s hard to believe when i’ve read it too
which part did you like *feels nervous while waiting for answer* or didn’t like?
Dude you need to be selling it on the interwebz!! I know there’s this site that you can sell it on and they publish 1 copy at a time for each order or something. Damn, this was years ago so my memory is fuzzy x( Ah well I know you just want people to just READ it first too without paying but when it gets popular, you know!!? And given how much heart/torture/pain/agony that went into it it’s GONNA TO SELL BIG!
“i’m gonna be a writer”
girlie, you already are a writer :)
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